Self Reflection

Reading the peer comment on my blog made me feel that I should reread my blog more then 2 times, because normally I always reread my blog 2 times always but my peer told me that there was some easy mistakes so I think I should be more careful about it and make my blog post better. And I think I have many grammar errors so I want to more carefully look when I reread. My peer told me that I'm using too much word 'and' and I think that makes the blog little bit boring so I want to be more careful when I'm writing my blog. From my perspective by reading my blog, I think I should make the introduction more interesting, because when I read my peer's blog his introduction made me more interest about what he's writing. When I thought back my blog introduction, I felt it was really boring, so I want to improve more.

I predict that my grade for this blog post will be in B range maybe B or B-, because there was some easy grammar errors. But I linked the sources that I used in the writing which I didn't do it last time and I made 5 paragraphs. I think I should improve more by stop writing 'and' a lot and try use more difficult vocabulary (the vocabulary which is more hard and more easy to describe what I want to write). Also, I want to try tell more connections about my topic and what's worth fighting for, because when I write the examples I think what I'm writing is always same and getting boring so I want to search more and make connections to make the blog more interesting.